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Critique by YvetteHawkeye Jul 1, 2013, 3:27:32 PM
The shading is spectacular and the detail is amazing with both the tattoo and the uniforms. Their hair even was very nicely done.
The tattoo as the backdrop seems a little out of place, but it is what really brought these two together. So it does well to remember that. The only thing that bugs me about this drawing are their faces. I think the artist shouldn't have drawn the line where the nose meets the brow on Hawkeye's face and Roy's eyes seem a little too wide.
Overall though, I say it was job well done.
And I encourage the artist to keep drawing.
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:iconsaizo-san:
I find this piece intriguing. The body proportions are fine and the color shading and detail are excellent. However, I must point out that the character's faces are a bit of a put-off. The shape and positioning are a little off and expressions are oddly flat. Honestly, that's the only thing I find needing correction. You can try practicing drawing more characters in the sideways or 3-quarter view profiles and maybe try watching MikeCrilley on Youtube. You can pick up some useful pointers here and there. Feel free to view the artworks of others to learn more on facial positioning. You can come and view my profile for more experience. I hope to see more of your work in future. The rest of the pic is fine.
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